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Re: sentences & paragraphs



Hello Bert,
you might be right, but if you send your short messages always TWICE, then I
prefer Salwa's long messages !!
And a happy enlightening new year.. in flames.
Dirk Adriaensens.

----- Original Message -----
From: "Bert Gedin" <gedinbert@hotmail.com>
To: <sdevree@email.com>; <soc-casi-discuss@lists.cam.ac.uk>
Sent: Monday, January 07, 2002 10:34 PM
Subject: Re: sentences & paragraphs


> Dear Salwa & all CASI people,
>
> Sorry, but I have to agree with Felicity re. the lengthy, and somewhat
> unwieldy, articles. In my view, and I speak as one un-highpowered, who
> prefers to keep things uncomplicated, the sheer volume of words takes away
> the desire to actually want to read on. May I suggest that a resum'e or
> (horrible phrase!) 'condensed' version of, at the very most,
> a tenth of the original piece be shown, then those interested can simply
> click on the URL underneath. - Are you going to shoot me down in flames? -
> By the way, the words of 'The Star Spangled Banner', well, what can one
> say...thought-provoking!
>
> Greetings,
> Bert Gedin,
> Birmingham, U.K.
>
>
> >From: "Salwa de Vree" <sdevree@email.com>
> >To: "farbuthnot" <asceptic@freenetname.co.uk>,
> >soc-casi-discuss@lists.cam.ac.uk
> >Subject: sentences &  paragraphs
> >Date: Mon, 07 Jan 2002 18:48:12 +0200
> >
> >
> >Dear Felicity, and other CASI members,
> >
> >Yes you are absolutely right about lack of paragraphs and sentences. I
> >agree, it does not make for a pleasant read. However, in my own defence,
> >please know that I do spend lots of time separating the text into the
> >paragraphs as they appear in the original, but for some reason, this
> >(free!) email system ignores my efforts (sic).
> >Anyway, it's better to read the original, and I always include the URL at
> >the bottom, so if you're online, just click on that, and you should get
the
> >"real" thing.
> >
> >Sorry about this email system of mine. If anyone has any suggestions
about
> >how to overcome this, please let me know.
> >
> >Salwa,
> >Leiden, The Netherlands.
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
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